[sheepdog-users] Fwd: [sheepdog] Update of "Getting started" docs on Github wiki
sirio81 at gmail.com
Sat Sep 27 23:16:59 CEST 2014
2014-09-27 12:47 GMT+02:00 Björn Pettersson <bjorn at undef.io>:
> Hi list,
> First off I understand you've produced some kick-ass software, and I'd
> like to use it myself! Unfortunately the first thing people see is not
> the great software, but the documentation. The documentation is
> definitely okay, but I think we can make some improvements, and I want
> to help!
> I'm new to sheepdog and just started to read the Getting started guide.
> Most things I understand fine, but some things were a bit unclear and
> fuzzy. So I updated the wiki to reflect what I think you mean in a few
> places. Please review my changes (link below) so I'm not lying. ;)
Hi, thank you for your review, I think the corrections you made are fine.
But there were other parts where I'm not confident enough to make any
> changes. Like these:
> > Usually sheepdog and QEMU are installed on every node, and the cluster
> > manager on three nodes.
> Should this maybe say "and the cluster manager on all nodes"?
corosync, all nodes;
zookeer, 3 nodes can monitor hundreds of other nodes.
> > Sheepdog has the back-end store to store the data object persistently
> > on the node basis.
> I don't really get this, could this be put in another way?
I also don't get it.
If no one can explain it better, we can remove it.
> > 2. Boot the virtual machine without sheep daemon started on local node
> > <pre>
> > $ qemu-system-x86_64 sheepdog:192.168.2.45:7000:Alice
> Should this be "Boot the virtual machine with sheepdog daemon running on
> a remote node"?
I think you can change it.
The following is a third way to say the same thing:
"Boot the virtual machine that is stored on the cluster from a server that
isn't part of the cluster"
> Other points:
> o You use "sheepdog" and "Sheepdog" inconsistently, which one do you
> wish to use? I can probably update it if you let me know.
> o Some places says "sheep daemon", should this be "sheepdog daemon"?
> Again, just for the sake of consistency.
Sheepdog refer to the project in general (so the combination of sheep and
sheep is the name of prcess/daemon that is running on the server.
Like when speaking of Samba e smbd.
I think it's correct to use the upper case letter for Sheepdog because is
the name of the project.
For sheep process, it's not.
> Please review the changes I made here:
> And please let me know if this is appreciated and if you are interested
> in more feedback like this.
Your review is very welcome and appreciated.
I recently made many changes on the "getting started" section but I got no
time to review.
There were some new and old typos.
You may also want to read the Administrator Manual
There are the same information you find in the wiki but more verbose and
hopefully easier to understand for a new user.
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